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Does My Head Look Big In This?

February 10th 2008 09:10


A while ago I wrote an article about Randa Abdel-Fattah, click here to see what I had to say and how much I've back-peddled with this review. It's not that I disagree with my optimistic appraisal of Abdel-Fattah or her inspiring status as a potential role-model for young Australians, but what I am at odds with is how excited I sound at the end of said article in regards to reading her debut novel, Does My Head Look Big in This?. I was wrong to be excited. The book sounded good, and Abdel-Fattah's skills as a public speaker (no doubt honed by her dayjob as a lawyer) helped sell the book to me. In light of now having read the actual thing I have to admit that the book isn't actually all that good. Which is a shame, especially as so many people recommended it to me.


The basic premise of Does My Head Look Big in This? seems to be to do Looking for Alibrandi with Muslim-Australians instead of Italian-Australians. The main character, Amal, is a 16 year old muslim girl at a predominantly white-bread anglo-Australian private school. One morning she wakes up and decides that it's time to wear the hijab, the scarf that muslim women wear to cover their hair as part of their faith, and the book follows the consequences of this amongst her friends, family and peers at school.

There are various subplots that pertain to what it means to adhere to the islamic faith within Australian society and the book deals with themes of cultural and social identity and all that jazz. Abdel-Fattah works to dispel many myths about Australian muslims and islam in general, and she writes with a breezy, easygoing style in the hope of making it palatable to the average teen reader. The book has won a lot of praise for it's educational qualities and politcal correctness, and I think a few schools have picked it up as a classroom English text. It was roughly 30 pages into the book when I first had to suppress the urge to spew.


I'm sorry, and I understand the need to combat the common mainstream perceptions of muslim-Australian society, but Does My Head Look Big in This? takes it all too far - offering an embarrassingly politically-correct, squeaky-clean story with a heroine crafted far too self-consciously to the author's designs to educate the assumed bigoted masses of white Australia. I fear she may have been preaching to the converted - those who need educating the most are those who wouldn't touch this book with a 3 metre barge pole, and those who willingly pick up a book with a quirky rom-com style muslim girl on the front probably aren't all that prejudiced to begin with either. Amal comes across as too infallible and overly precocious rather than the headstrong smart-arse she describes herself as. The continuous rallying against the misconceptions of those around her get very tiring to read and after a while it feels like a bad fish-out-of-water sitcom or disney film where the put-upon protagonist teaches her co-stars (in this case mainly made up of up-tight anglos and anglo-wannabe muslims) how to live life and love it.

Maybe my own atheist leanings made it impossible for me to be less than heavily-subjective as this is, after all, a book about remaining faithful to one's religion. As a result I found all the hoo-haring hypocrisy about Amal liking some guy to be terribly overdone and overwrought, and at the end of the day I just found it to be as alienating to me as all the anti-muslim attitudes probably are to the author. I really wanted to like this book but every page of the way I found it a struggle and full of too many subplots with too little substance, and when I reached the last few pages I wasn't convinced that anything of any consequence had really happened since the novel's beginning. In light of this, a more apt title for this book would probably be Muslims are OK, as this is pretty much all the book has to say. Who knows, maybe I just can't read predominantly-girly teen-fiction... there's bound to be at least one whole genre of writing I don't like, and maybe I just found it. That doesn't really excuse my misgivings about this book though, but it should at least dissuade me from reading any other books like it in the future!

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Comment by Anonymous

February 20th 2008 01:03
yo this book is aweosme.
it is about a girl that wants to wear a hijab and is scared because she has to deal with the bad stuff her friends are going to say to her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

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Comment by Anonymous

February 20th 2008 01:05
this book is freakin good
it is one of the best ever.
well now i have to go and read this book.
hope everyone in theworld becomes muslim

Fr: A KID

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April 13th 2008 14:07

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Comment by Luke

April 14th 2008 10:14
er... did you read the review? I'm not exactly giving it the big thumbs up.

Comment by Anonymous

May 12th 2008 06:17
I think Randa's book was great!!!! Maybe it is your athiest views on life that makes it hard for you to accept or read. To simplify the book down to ...it should be called Muslims are ok...is just an example of the ignorance Randa was and is trying to break down. The reason why someone like you would have a problem with her book seems more obviously because you cant accept that Muslims can be as simple as that, as simple as any other non-muslim, as simple as any other christian or buddhist or athiest or agnostic. A muslim is a person, a human being, and her character in the book was also an australian. I am an australian born who is a muslim. I am as aussie as they come, i have crushes on guys, i went to a co-ed school, i deal with the same issues as any other person deals with in today's society. I jsut so happen to be muslim as well which shouldnt make a difference to anyone but me. Randa's book aptly portrays a typical muslim youth female in today's society.....the fact that it 'simplified' muslims within 'white australia' is not a criticism of the book....it is actually its strength. She sets out to break down the misconceptions and ignorance and narrow mindedness of the media and aspects of today's society. I accept that yours is an opinion of the book that you hold. And everyone is entitled to their opinion, especially all the schools that picked up her book as part of the curriculum, and the people who decided her book should be shortlisted for an award, and win!, and i guess turkey, sweden, america, italy, germany, norway, indonesia, and the UK are all entitled to their opinion that the book was good enough to be published in those countries.
I think Im going to agree with them that the book is pretty darn good.

Comment by Luke

May 16th 2008 01:29
Hi,

first of all, thank you for your indepth commentary on the review. i genuinely appreciate it, it makes a nice change from some of the ridiculous and nonsensical comments i often get on here.

i admit that my atheist leanings are probably responsible (at least in some part) for my opinion. i think i owed that as some kind of possible explanation in my efforts to be as objective as possible. believe it or not, i don't have anything against muslims, and i did feel a bit uncomfortable writing what i wrote as i was afraid it could be interpreted as some kind of bigotry or discrimination on my part BUT please believe me, that this is not my intention and that i am NOT a discriminatory person (see my previous article on Randa Abdel-Fattah for proof of this).

I read this book hoping and wanting to like it - i was disappointed that i didn't, and to not reflect this in my review would be dishonest on my part. i tried to analyze why i didn't like this book, and the above review is the end result. I don't accept that my own personal beliefs are the ONLY reasons why I disliked it, but I do accept that these beliefs probably made it easier for me to pick up on the preachiness that is implicit throughout the novel.

thanks for stopping by, and like you said - everyone is entitled to their opinion, i'd be silly not to realise that.

Comment by Anonymous

May 24th 2008 15:00
I also, really like this book. I do believe that your Atheist beliefs had something to do with your dislike for the book. Muslims are OK would have been a totally illegitimate name for this book, that really has nothing to do with proving that "Muslims are OK". I can personally say, that I would not be remotely interested in picking up a book entitled Muslims are OK. Your review seems that you are disapproving of those who are "very religious". And just for the record, I'm not Muslim or Australian. I happen to be an American Methodist Christian. I am only familiar with two Muslims. I know one woman who wears the hijab and full body coverings. She is very much like most people I have met, minus the fact that she covers her entire body and takes time out of the day to pray. I know another teenage female who is Muslim and wears no coverings, because she was picked on about it and elementary school. I have often tried to encourage her to wear her traditional dress again, but to no avail. She was, for lack of better word, traumatized by the harrassment she received and I would definitely recommend Does My Head Look Big in This? to her.

Comment by Luke

May 25th 2008 07:20
I applaud your attitude.

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